Mighty Aphrodite

Thanks so much for your suggestions!! I really appreciate it. Is Damien the name of the Omen kid, or something? I've never seen it before, so I wouldn't know. But ...

LOL, I promise it won't be Four to Stand II. This one is techinally called "Four to Stand: The Mortal Angels," Four to Stand being the series name, and Mortal ...

LOL, Jenna, I love your comments. They make me laugh. Anyway...thanks again for pointing all of this out for me. I've gotta go through and correct all the chapters pretty ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I'm definitely listening to your suggestions, too, so keep 'em coming, if you find anything else! I really appreciate it.

Ah ha...I knew that I wrote 10/07, not 11/07! Shoulda checked it! Thanks for letting me know about the title, too. It's not as exciting as before, but ah well...what ...

Haha - Thanks for letting me know! :D

Thanks for catching all that for me. Just so you aren't confused--Max ended up with the top part of the mop--you know, that white spidery part. I didn't want to ...

lol~Sorry that Ness is kind of picky. But, I mean, if your mom married a guy you didn't like, would you be happy? I know I'd be putting up a ...

It'll get better, I promise. Just need to get some background info in there somewhere... I'm glad you like it so far! Jen

Hmm, I wonder how that stray [/i] got in there? lol. NO! lol, I know that you do like it!! Haha, it's constructive criticism. THanks, especially, for the whole bit ...

It's not that I'm going to ignore anyone's points, or whatever, but I think if you read the first chapter (which I'll post soon!), you'll get a better understanding of ...